Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Poverty

For class, we had to read two articles about poverty by Theodore Dalrymple and Jo Goodwin Parker. After reading and annotating both articles, I felt like Darlrymple's essay connected to me more as a reader than Parker's.

This was surprising to me, since Parker's article is more of a life story than a report, and I thought the emotion would bring more depth, but it actually turned me away. I thought that she was dwelling too much on her own personal problems in the story, and just threw it on the page. It didn't have any constructive facts or argument; it just talked about how poor Parker was and how she didn't have any money for anything except for food. She didn't really talk about the definition of poor, except for the couple sentences in the first paragraph.

Dalrymple's essay seemed more factual and had more evidence as to why people are poor and the definition of it. He talked more about the definition and not his personal connection to it. I took this as the goal for these articles, and thought Dalrymple accomplished it better than Parker. I liked Dalrymple's point about how there will always be poor people because you base it off the rich. The part where Dalrymple states, "...they are not poor in the traditional way" was very interesting because I do believe some people labeled "poor" are not poor at all. Some people choose to live that way, and like to; I label them as "upper class" poor. I understand that some citizens are born poor and they didn't want to be and are homeless and all the sad stories out there prove this point, but the "upper class" poor are just fine the way they are living.

Some of the poverty stricken people are happier than the richest people in the world. Like the cliche phrase, "Money doesn't buy happiness," some of the rich are lonely and have no one but their money.

5 comments:

  1. I disagree. I think Parker's essay was a lot better and I connected with that a lot more. I didn't like Daylrymple's because it seemed like an outsider's view of what poverty is. Parker's was a look at poverty from someone who has experienced it first hand and had so many descriptive details that really helped show the rough conditions.

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  2. I disagree as well. Parker's was a lot better, and had more positive arguments. The other just seemed to be really angry.

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  3. I would also have to disagree with this. I thought that Parker's essay was better because of the fact that she used so many examples, and it made it easy to read.

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  4. I completely agree with you. I connected more with Dalrymple's essay because it was written a lot better than Parker's, had a broader focus and used a lot more facts to back it up. Also, Parker's was rather weak because it just focused on her and had almost only a pathos argument.

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  5. Parker did a great job of getting the reader in her shoes by using blunt, relevant examples.

    Dalyrimple on the other hand is just another person who doesn't understand what it's like to be a poor situation.

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